On Thu, May 6, 2010 at 11:18 PM, Julien Claassen wrote:
Good prog rock arrangement, great progression. The quality of
instruments and the recording is great from what I can tell on these
I don't like the drum timing at all, it feels off-beat and delayed. It
should be punctuating and rock solid. Don't humanize this. Drummers
aren't humans %)
Your voice is rather deep and deserves a completely different
arrangement... it's mostly drowned by the rest of the arrangement. I
hardly understand the lyrics.
That, or the song would tremendously benefit from transposing the
vocals an octave or at least a few notes higher. Also, some backing
vocals would also add a lot.
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