Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-)

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To: Julien Claassen <julien@...>
Cc: linux-audio-user <linux-audio-user@...>, linux-audio-music list <lam@...>
Date: Friday, May 7, 2010 - 3:33 pm

On Thu, May 6, 2010 at 11:18 PM, Julien Claassen wrote:

Good prog rock arrangement, great progression. The quality of
instruments and the recording is great from what I can tell on these
headphones here.

I don't like the drum timing at all, it feels off-beat and delayed. It
should be punctuating and rock solid. Don't humanize this. Drummers
aren't humans %)

Your voice is rather deep and deserves a completely different
arrangement... it's mostly drowned by the rest of the arrangement. I
hardly understand the lyrics.

That, or the song would tremendously benefit from transposing the
vocals an octave or at least a few notes higher. Also, some backing
vocals would also add a lot.
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[LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Julien Claassen, (Thu May 6, 9:19 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Folderol, (Thu May 13, 9:20 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Julien Claassen, (Thu May 13, 9:28 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Philipp, (Fri May 7, 9:54 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Julien Claassen, (Sat May 8, 7:16 am)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Leonard Ritter, (Fri May 7, 3:33 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Julien Claassen, (Fri May 7, 4:22 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Louigi Verona, (Fri May 7, 12:25 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Julien Claassen, (Fri May 7, 3:10 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Nigel Henry, (Fri May 7, 12:12 pm)
Re: [LAU] A pop tune from Julien :-), Julien Claassen, (Fri May 7, 3:08 pm)