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On Thu, May 6, 2010 at 11:18 PM, Julien Claassen  wrote:

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> Hello everyone!

>  So finally I got some new music ready. It's very 80s this time, I know I

> proclamed more than once, that this is not my decade, but April is not my

> month, so the two deserve each other. :-) The song is called "Enemy April

> fool" and can be downloaded/listened to here:

Good prog rock arrangement, great progression. The quality of

instruments and the recording is great from what I can tell on these

headphones here.
I don't like the drum timing at all, it feels off-beat and delayed. It

should be punctuating and rock solid. Don't humanize this. Drummers

aren't humans %)
Your voice is rather deep and deserves a completely different

arrangement... it's mostly drowned by the rest of the arrangement. I

hardly understand the lyrics.
That, or the song would tremendously benefit from transposing the

vocals an octave or at least a few notes higher. Also, some backing

vocals would also add a lot.

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