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Llewellyn Beasley wrote:

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> I've not posted around here much but I've finished up a song and would

> like opinions if anyone's interested in giving them.

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Okay, I'll jump.
The mix throughout is good, nicely balanced, but I agree that at times

your drum groove is just a little bit too relaxed. To my ears there is

often an audible flamming between the snare and the downbeat, personally

I'd tighten it up a bit.
On another personal note: I know you call it a song, but to me it's more

of a groove loop (though the progression at ~4' is noticeable). More

formal variety would be welcome, and vocals usually create what I call a

song. Of course you can always claim inspiration from Mendelssohn. :)
The recorded sound is very good, as is the playing. The guitars are

especially sweet. I agree with the respondent who advised letting it sit

for a week. Return to it with a fresh outlook, see what happens, post it

again.
Gee, that's such good advice I think I should start following it myself. :)
Thanks for sharing !
Best,
dp
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