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Dave Phillips wrote:

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> Greetings,

>

> Thanks to everyone who lent their ears to my latest Csound/AVSynthesis

> excursion. You're all very brave. :)

I don't know, it seems like a few of us are rather keen on this kind of

thing.
> I've placed new versions on-line:

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>

>     http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-avs_p01_090805.ogg

>

>     http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-avs_p01_090805.mp3

>

> Not much different, but I reduced the gain on the nasty bits, it sounds

> better now.

subtly but definitely.
>

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> Garry Ogle wrote:

>> If you're gonna publish this as a stand-alone piece - and I think you

>> should - I would tidy the ending up a bit.

>>

>> My inclination would be to crop it at some appropriate point close to

>> the end, and then reprise the quieter part of the beginning.

>>

>> does that make any sense to you?

>>

> I followed your suggestion, G, but I'm not sure I care for the reprise.

> If you like I'll send an OGG/MP3 of that arrangement and you can let me

> know what you think of it. It sounds good, it just doesn't seem to do

> anything special for the piece.

>

> Best,

>

> dp

Please do, Ogg is good.

The reason I made that (off-the-cuff) suggestion was that the ending

seemed just a little abrupt. I thought a reprise might fix that and

achieve an increased sense of closure.

I'm picking at very fine details here; it doesn't stand out as a flaw

in the piece. But then, as you surely know, attending to subtle details

can make all the difference.
Regards, G.
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