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=0A=0A=0A=0A________________________________=0A=0A=A0=0AHello Oleg.=A0 Your=

 English is excellent.=0A=0AI've been listening to this piece over and over=

; that's not something that I usually do.=A0 "I Flying" is saying something=

, but I haven't yet figured out what it is saying.=A0 A very complex compos=

ition.=A0 Congratulations, Well Done!=0A=0AI think it's important to know a=

 little background about the person reviewing your work, so that you know w=

hat their biases are.=0A=0AI'm a vocalist, coming from bass cleff, brass in=

strument school training (baritone, trombone, and tuba.)=A0 As a vocalist, =

I focus entirely on the words.=A0 As an ex-bass cleff brass player, my next=

 focus is on the counter melody.=A0 My final focus is on the melody.=A0 I'm=

 also sound oriented rather than visual oriented (I have bad eyesight.)=0A=

=0AThere's another follower of this list who is most definitely visually or=

iented.=A0 I hope he will listen to this piece and give us his visual inter=

pretation of the work.=A0 For now, here's my sound interpretation:=0A=0AThe=

 feel of this piece first had me thinking of Hotel California by The Eagles=

.=A0 Then it started moving into a feel of Stairway to Heaven by Led Zeppli=

n.=A0 Then it shifted into something completely different, with the ending =

coming as a total surprise to me with that final guitar 'scream'.=A0 (One o=

f the best reproductions of a human scream done with a guitar that I've eve=

r heard.)=0A=0AAs for the recorder in the piece, leave it in.=A0 It sets a =

feeling that the guitar picks up and elaborates on.=A0=A0 I=A0like the dial=

og between guitar and bass guitar, with the bass guitar picking up the feel=

ing from the guitar at around 1:22.=0A=0AThe guitar shifts into its own 'in=

tense' feeling at 1:40.=A0 At 2:33 the recorder tries to regain control and=

 calmness.=A0 But to no avail, as the guitar reasserts=A0itself at 3:00 and=

 then proceeds to take listener by the heart=A0and jump off a cliff!=0A=0AA=

s I said, 'I Flying' is telling a story--saying something.=A0 I wasn't exac=

tly sure when I first heard it what the message was.=A0 But there is no que=

stion=A0its message is something with very strong emotional impact.=A0=A0Yo=

ur later comments about how your life had recently had=A0sorrow in it is gi=

ving me clue.=0A=0APlease post more of your work.=A0 Thank you,=0AStephen=

=0A=0AHi, all!=0A=0AI've recently finished long-awaited(for me) instrumenta=

l composition=0A(http://www.archive.org/download/IFlying/Ash_Ya_Lechu_I_Fly=

ing_986.mp3)=0Aand need your opinions about it. If you please, tell me abou=

t my=0Acomposition/arrangement/performance/mastering etc mistakes. Sorry fo=

r=0Amy English :)=0A

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 =0AHi=

, all!I've recently finished long-awaited(for me) instrumental comp=

osition(http://www.archive.org/download/IFlying/Ash_Ya_Lechu_I_Flying_9=

86.mp3)and need your opinions about it. If you please, tell me about my=

composition/arrangement/performance/mastering etc mistakes. Sorry formy English :)=0AHello Oleg.  Your English is excellent.=0A =0AI've been listening to this piece over and over; that's n=

ot something that I usually do.  "I Flying" is saying something, but I=

 haven't yet figured out what it is saying.  A very complex compositio=

n.  Congratulations, Well Done!=0A =0AI think it's impo=

rtant to know a little background about the person reviewing your work, so =

that you know what their biases are.=0A =0AI'm a vocalist, c=

oming from bass cleff, brass instrument school training (baritone, trombone=

, and tuba.)  As a vocalist, I focus entirely on the words.  As a=

n ex-bass cleff brass player, my next focus is on the counter melody. =

 My final focus is on the melody.  I'm also sound oriented rather than=

 visual oriented (I have bad eyesight.)=0A =0AThere's anothe=

r follower of this list who is most definitely visually oriented.  I h=

ope he will listen to this piece and give us his visual interpretation of t=

he work.  For now, here's my sound interpretation:=0A =0AThe feel of this piece first had me thinking of Hotel California by The =

Eagles.  Then it started moving into a feel of Stairway to Heaven by L=

ed Zepplin.  Then it shifted into something completely different, with=

 the ending coming as a total surprise to me with that final guitar 'scream=

'.  (One of the best reproductions of a human scream done with a guita=

r that I've ever heard.)=0A =0AAs for the recorder in the pi=

ece, leave it in.  It sets a feeling that the guitar picks up and elab=

orates on.   I like the dialog between guitar and bass guita=

r, with the bass guitar picking up the feeling from the guitar at around 1:=

22.=0A =0AThe guitar shifts into its own 'intense' feeling a=

t 1:40.  At 2:33 the recorder tries to regain control and calmness.&nb=

sp; But to no avail, as the guitar reasserts itself at 3:00 and then p=

roceeds to take listener by the heart and jump off a cliff!=0A&nb=

sp;=0AAs I said, 'I Flying' is telling a story--saying something.&nbsp=

; I wasn't exactly sure when I first heard it what the message was.  B=

ut there is no question its message is something with very strong emot=

ional impact.  Your later comments about how your life had recent=

ly had sorrow in it is giving me clue.=0A =0APlease pos=

t more of your work.  Thank you,=0AStephen=0A =0A=

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