Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone.

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Date: Thursday, December 18, 2008 - 12:24 pm

Folderol wrote:

very nice song and performance. the sound of the vocals is really good.

and now for the nitpicking :-D

to me it sounds a little odd that the organ constantly plays "colla
parte" with the vocals. in this composition, it makes some sense by
adding a "droning quality" (in the positive sense) together with the way
the same melody is used as an interlude. but generally i think your
intonation is good enough that you could take some more freedom with the
accompaniment in other tunes (and there is absolutely no dishonor in
using a colla parte instrument during recording to help nailing the
intonation and get rid of it in the final mix. what, me do such things?
never!)

the only thing i did not like was the synth syncopations at the end.
they disturb the drone and don't add weight to the ending, only unrest.
i could imagine the very same notes, but played a lot more laid back and
maybe with a rhodes sound, to have a better effect.

but then, nitpicking is always easy. thanks for sharing this song, and
keep 'em coming!

best,

jörn

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[LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Folderol, (Sun Dec 14, 8:47 pm)
Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Folderol, (Fri Dec 19, 6:35 pm)
Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Joern Nettingsmeier, (Thu Dec 18, 12:24 pm)
Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Atte André Jensen, (Tue Dec 16, 11:37 am)
Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Loki Davison, (Sun Dec 14, 11:08 pm)
Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Folderol, (Mon Dec 15, 9:25 pm)
Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Dave Phillips, (Wed Dec 17, 12:32 pm)
Re: [LAU] A little outside my comfort zone., Fons Adriaensen, (Sun Dec 14, 10:28 pm)