Re: [LAU] two new tracks

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To: Dave Phillips <dlphillips@...>, lau >> linux audio users <linux-audio-user@...>
Date: Sunday, August 19, 2007 - 1:57 pm

Dave Phillips wrote:

> http://linux-sound.org/audio/twisted.mp3

Nice. I like the sound, it's clean and crisp.

The guitar playing (you, I guess) is great. However I feel you should
work out a few better versions of the turnback (I VI II V)

For instance in the final two bars before the "solo" you play | D B | Em
A7 |, right? Those triads and clean dominant7 chords sounds out of
context to my ears. Some of the following are fuller and richer and
might sound more in place:

| D6 Bm7 | Em7 A7b9 |
| D6 Bm9 | Em9 A7b913 |
| D6/9 F13 | Em9 A7#9b13 |
| D6/9 F13 | E13 Eb13 |

Just my .01 :-)

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