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Thanks for your comments Thorsten. They are again really constructive.
The laidback timing is too late at places, so the feeling

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> becomes sloppy, nerving, imho.

   Indeed. I need to work on the rythm. I was in fact trying to give the

drums a real feeling, by playing hydrogen from my keyboard. But, I'm out of

rythm in some places. Also, I'm not sure what you mean by 'laidback timing',

but what I think you mean is the first piano loop which has some blanks

which last too long (1 out of 4)?
The lead tries hard to be dramatic.

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I don't understand. You mean that the guitar tries to be sad?
But this has quite some potential.

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> I would straighten up the timing just a bit, shorten the

> track aiming at 4 minutes, make the lead sound clearly

> unlike a guitar and more smooth.

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> Thorsten Wilms

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I think it could remain at 6 minutes if I add some variations. In fact the

whole thing is in 1 chord..I should add some chord variations, and not play

the guitar solo loop 2 times. 1 should be enough. I like the guitar sound. I

don't think I would change it. I agree on the point of straighten up the

timing as said before.
Julien.

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