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Shayne O'Connor a écrit :

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> hi all

>

> i've just finished re-recording a track i linked to the list a few weeks

> ago ... i've tried incorporating some suggestions, and most importantly

> - i think my guitar is in tune!

>

> http://www.machinehasnoagenda.com/downloads/the_girls_-_the_sailor_(final).ogg

>

> i think it sounds heaps better than the previous version, but it doesn't

> really matter in any case, as it is more just one of a few tracks i'm

> throwing together for a band i'm trying to get happening ...

>

> but if anyone still wants to try their hand at mixing this song, just

> let me know and i'll see if i can pack up the tracks into a torrent file.

>

> should have my next one up soon.

>

> shayne

> 

Hi shayne

Nice song but as james said I think you can improved your mix again.
Global impressions :

- the drums are to much in the background for my taste.

- the beginning of the song is a little muddy, the combinaison of the

vocal, background vocal and rythm guitar is maybe a little to much in

the mid-low mid range, things become much more clear after 1:20.
What I would try :

- A little more drum

- A little less rythm guitar before 1:20 or maybe just less low-mid on

this track

- Something can be done also on the background vocal before 1:20, after

they are fine but before they are maybe to much present.
Just my 2 € cents ;-)
Christophe